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First Chapter Query Prep
Beta
Reading
Outline
Evaluation
Investment: $150
Investment: $275
Investment: $150-450
Ensure your opening pages are as developmentally sound and polished as possible before embarking on the epic quest of querying.
Get subjective, reader-focused feedback on your fantasy manuscript before handing it off to an editor.
Professional feedback from a fantasy editor on your outline and planning materials to help you avoid structural mistakes before drafting 100k words.
Submit up to 10,000 words of planning material, such as:
- Your beat sheet
- A long outline
- Your worldbuilding story bible
- Character profile sheets
- Any combination of the above
And receive:
- 3-5 pages of summarized feedback
- Annotations in the margins
- Continued email support for 2 weeks following the delivery of my feedback to address any questions
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Submit your first chapter (max. of 5,000 words), and receive:
- Detailed margin comments with developmental considerations for the opening/hook, character introduction, establishment of conflict and stakes, and genre alignment
- Line edits using Track Changes
- A short editorial letter summarizing my feedback
- Continued email support for 2 weeks following the delivery of my feedback to address any questions
READ MY BOOK
Tier 1 - Lite ($150 up to 100k words)
- Big-picture feedback only
- 1-2 page report focusing on overall enjoyment, confusion points, pacing highs/lows, character likability, and potential DNF points.
Tier 2 - Standard ($250 up to 100k words)
- Marginal comments
- 4-6 page report focusing on all areas in Lite, plot clarity and momentum, character connection, stakes and tension, worldbuilding clarity, and emotional engagement.
Tier 3 - Premium ($450 to to 100k words)
- Marginal comments
- 6-10 page report focusing on all areas in Standard, high-level craft flags from an editor's POV, and actionable next steps.
Think of the Premium tier as a super light evaluation.
Please note: Due to the scope of these services, a sample edit is not provided.
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The hero's journey
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Plot your fantasy novel with this FREE spreadsheet that follows The Hero's Journey—a timeless and epic story structure.
Includes:
- A beat-by-beat breakdown
- Done-for-you word count calculations
- Side-by-side comparison of LOTR and HP
- Blank cells for brave writers
- Extra notes about each act and beat
Download now to start making magic!
